Here's a couple of your essays, with annotations added to two (the 3rd was marked off a printout); all feature some good passages and examples of how to tackle parts of such an essay well (nobody quite managed an A-grade essay, which I wouldn't expect from your 1st essay on this topic):
Will 1PCCgood
Rich 1PCCgood
Tom 1PCCgood
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